FIL-3 Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Hi ok have a listen to that and see what you think..Iv'e been a bit creative with the lyrics shoes..hope you don't mind, and Ive stuck a drum beat behind this just for context( now with added bass solo.)don't panic guitarists.its only for fun http://www.btinternet.com/~harrisonjones/song2.mp3 FIL www.filjones.co.uk I know you think you know what you thought I said, but what you think you thought I said isn't what I ment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shars Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 WOW!! I like it but I am biased though www.myspace.com/yacababy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philip OKeefe Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Nice starting point Fil - good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylver Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 I really like this Fil. It flows so nice. I really don't know what to put here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIL-3 Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Well I got to hit the sack..work tomorrow..00:22 here.g' night FIL www.filjones.co.uk I know you think you know what you thought I said, but what you think you thought I said isn't what I ment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shars Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 same here...its been a busy time hey....Nite all www.myspace.com/yacababy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
offramp Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Fil, It's startling how close you and I are on the drum track. Your take on it also gave me an idea for a B section. I'm eating at the moment, and need to think on it some more, but I believe it would be right up the alley on this one. If you and Dave come to agreement on the structure, I'll do drums. Think Copeland with a smattering of Gould restraint. Dave (offramp) (I'm sensing an inevitable collaboration between no-one but the "Dave"s of this forum...) I've upped my standards; now, up yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nursers Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Originally posted by offramp: Fil, It's startling how close you and I are on the drum track. Your take on it also gave me an idea for a B section. I'm eating at the moment, and need to think on it some more, but I believe it would be right up the alley on this one. If you and Dave come to agreement on the structure, I'll do drums. Think Copeland with a smattering of Gould restraint. Dave (offramp) (I'm sensing an inevitable collaboration between no-one but the "Dave"s of this forum...) The Keyboard Chronicles Podcast Check out your fellow forumites in an Apple Music playlist Check out your fellow forumites in a Spotify playlist My Music: Stainless Fields Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franknputer Posted January 5, 2005 Author Share Posted January 5, 2005 "Dave's note here, man..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franknputer Posted January 5, 2005 Author Share Posted January 5, 2005 Digging the vocals, man - whole different feel to it now. That bass solo was pretty wicked, too! Did you straight overlay that on the original, or did you have to 'adjust' it any? [Edited to remove retarded typing] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gruuve Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Originally posted by FIL-3: Hi ok have a listen to that and see what you think..Iv'e been a bit creative with the lyrics shoes..hope you don't mind, and Ive stuck a drum beat behind this just for context( now with added bass solo.)don't panic guitarists.its only for fun http://www.btinternet.com/~harrisonjones/song2.mp3 Fil: I'm liking the vocals dude...that's killer. Does anything need to change in the tentative arrangment? (I don't think it does, but not positive.) Nice bass solo also...I couldn't help but slap this part too, although mine's a little more like what I have in mind for the percussion solo (the bass solo is the start of the percussion solo, essentially). If the arrangement doesn't need to be any different, can you provide a track that syncs up with the reference track? Thx, Dave Old bass players never die, they just buy lighter rigs. - Tom Capasso, 11/9/2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIL-3 Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Thanks, Dave. yeah I can post a shortened file to match your click track no problem..let me know what you think of the lyrics I used...any good. I couldn't get all of them to fit...without rushing them. FIL www.filjones.co.uk I know you think you know what you thought I said, but what you think you thought I said isn't what I ment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gruuve Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Phil: I think the vocal line is absolutely killer...very nice work! Here's the link to the sample mix: http://www.ipass.net/davesisk/music/Rebuild_SampleMix1.mp3 Dave Old bass players never die, they just buy lighter rigs. - Tom Capasso, 11/9/2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shars Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Blimey! this is fantastic stuff! well done all you guys www.myspace.com/yacababy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIL-3 Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Great stuff Dave, had a quick listen (at work) Cant wait to get home and see if we an get a third verse and some BKV... FIL www.filjones.co.uk I know you think you know what you thought I said, but what you think you thought I said isn't what I ment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gruuve Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Hey Fil: I'm not sure we need a 3rd verse...there's instrumental stuff going on over that section. A third chorus we do need, however. I think it would be cool to use the same lyrics, but maybe sing them just a little different in the 3rd chorus. OR, maybe use slightly different lyrics sung the same way in the 3rd chorus??? I'm thinking the percussion solo sounds a little rushed toward the end...I'll have to look at re-recording that part. Also, all the low end disappears after the bass solo...I may have to lug my 26" kick drum from the attic to fill in that space! LOL! Cool beans... Dave Old bass players never die, they just buy lighter rigs. - Tom Capasso, 11/9/2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franknputer Posted January 5, 2005 Author Share Posted January 5, 2005 Yeah, I agree about the ending chorus. Lots of space there, and it would bring it home nicely if there were some vocals intermingled with the instrumental action - maybe ad-lib a little something from the original part? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billster Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Here's an idea for that third chorus: Us guitar guys could play some short solos that take off from the melody in one line phrases, and then set up a call-and-response with the vocal through mixing. That way you can incorporate maybe 4-5 guitars, and you only need half as many lyrics (!) Buy my CD on CD Baby! Bill Hartzell - the website MySpace?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIL-3 Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 OK here is the shortened vocal wav file, sorry for the delay been busy, this I have repeated the chorus and then gone for the sort of ad lib thing using some of shoes spare lyrics...I think it works.. http://www.btinternet.com/~harrisonjones/song2_full_vocal.shn FIL www.filjones.co.uk I know you think you know what you thought I said, but what you think you thought I said isn't what I ment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franknputer Posted January 5, 2005 Author Share Posted January 5, 2005 Don't forget - we still gotta work in the cowbell. We gotta have more cowbell!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIL-3 Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 Just to add, that the adlib can be edited to allow space for whatever else you guys have in mind, if you want.. right, I'm going to hit the sack FIL www.filjones.co.uk I know you think you know what you thought I said, but what you think you thought I said isn't what I ment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franknputer Posted January 6, 2005 Author Share Posted January 6, 2005 Originally posted by FIL-3: right, I'm going to hit the sack Man - there's gotta be an easier way to hit those high notes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shoes Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 Originally posted by FIL-3: Just to add, that the adlib can be edited to allow space for whatever else you guys have in mind, if you want.. right, I'm going to hit the sack I'm in No-Band-Width-Land again so I'll have to wait until work to hear what you've got down. I thought there were lots of odd moments in there were a tallented vocalist would exercise their adlib abilities and come out on top of something the solo's can really cut away from. Glad it was of some use no matter what you do to fix it. I still think guitars are like shoes, but louder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIL-3 Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 quote:Originally posted by Christopher Kemp: quote:Originally posted by FIL-3: right, I'm going to hit the sack FIL www.filjones.co.uk I know you think you know what you thought I said, but what you think you thought I said isn't what I ment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gruuve Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 By the way folks, if I've neglected to acknowledge anyone who has said "I can contribute", I apologize. Not intentional, chalk it up to me being somewhat scatter-brained. So, here's what I probably should have posted much earlier: the "virtual team" for song #2 Me - music composition, arrangement, bass, percussion, backup vocals, interim test mixes Shoes - lyric composition FIL - lyric composition and lead vocal Chris Kemp - guitar, final mixing/mastering PBBPaul - guitar Offramp - drums and percussion Nursers - keyboards Rhonda Sisk - backup vocals If I've missed anyone, please don't be offended...just PM me and tell me I'm slack and what I should add to this post. Thx! Dave Old bass players never die, they just buy lighter rigs. - Tom Capasso, 11/9/2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
offramp Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 ...a few more "Dave"s on a track, and we will RULE!!! RULE, I TELL YOU!!! I've upped my standards; now, up yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gruuve Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 Originally posted by offramp: ...a few more "Dave"s on a track, and we will RULE!!! RULE, I TELL YOU!!!Man, I don't want to rule...that's entirely too much responsibility! Old bass players never die, they just buy lighter rigs. - Tom Capasso, 11/9/2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
offramp Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 NOnononono...see, delegation is KEY, here...we can ALWAYS say "Well, I gave that job to Dave...." I've upped my standards; now, up yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franknputer Posted January 7, 2005 Author Share Posted January 7, 2005 Dave Rules! The Buck Stops With Dave! Four More Daves! Hey - this is getting good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billster Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 Originally posted by offramp: NOnononono...see, delegation is KEY, here...we can ALWAYS say "Well, I gave that job to Dave...."I used to work in the school cafeteria at Berklee, and there was another kid working there named "Charles Hunter Prendergast, IV" (I'm not making that up) He usually went by Hunter, but some folks called him Charles. Anyway, at the start of the shift, the manager would dole out assignments to us scrubs and one day went like this: Charles - you do the serving line Bill - peel potatoes Hunter - stock the plate racks Dave - dishroom Prendergast - we need you to do salads Buy my CD on CD Baby! Bill Hartzell - the website MySpace?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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