Anderton Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 I haven't recorded anything in a different language for a while, so I thought I'd try some AI assistance. I asked for lyrics in French, based on the title Touch of Love, to see what AI would do. Here's the translation. I will give credit for making the words rhyme in English as well, and still have them convey the asinine triteness of the French lyrics. Caution!!! To prevent possible loss of brain cells, do not read all the way to the end. ## Verse 1 In the gentle morning light, Our hearts seek each other, take flight. Your smile, a sweet refrain, Our souls entwine, no need to explain. ## Chorus It's the touch of love, Like a gentle breeze, a secret from above. Our fingers brush, our gazes soar, In this tender dance, our lives explore. ## Verse 2 Beneath the silver moon's embrace, Our dreams weave, our fears efface. Your warm breath against my skin, Love pirouettes, an elusive spin. ## Chorus It's the touch of love, Like a gentle breeze, a secret from above. Our fingers brush, our gazes soar, In this tender dance, our lives explore. ## Bridge And if the world crumbles away, Our embraces will forever stay. The touch of love, eternal and true, In our hearts, it resides, me and you. ## Chorus It's the touch of love, Like a gentle breeze, a secret from above. Our fingers brush, our gazes soar, In this tender dance, our lives explore. ## Outro The touch of love, a melody divine, Echoing within us, an endless sign. In every gesture, every thrill, Our song begins, and time stands still. 1 Quote Craig Anderton Educational site: http://www.craiganderton.org Music: http://www.youtube.com/thecraiganderton Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/craig_anderton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thethirdapple Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 Awesome prompt, had not even wondered what the LLM’S are doing with other languages. Asinine? Would love to see the french grammar which it spit out? Which translator did you use? soooo many questions ?!?! PEACE _ _ _ Quote When musical machines communicate, we had better listen… http://youtube.com/@ecoutezpourentendre Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anderton Posted April 23 Author Share Posted April 23 7 hours ago, Thethirdapple said: Asinine? Would love to see the french grammar which it spit out? Which translator did you use? Asinine or cringey - take your choice! I actually find the French version cringier. It lost something in translation LOL. Below are the original lyrics that ChatGPT (Windows Copilot) vomited out. However, I will say there is one cool aspect - it built up a list of words that rhyme. So when I write my own lyrics, that info will be handy to have around. I hadn't considered rhyming "dessinent" and "devinent." ## Couplet 1 Dans la douce lumière du matin, Nos cœurs se cherchent, se dessinent. Ton sourire, un doux refrain, Nos âmes s'entrelacent, se devinent. ## Refrain C'est le toucher de l'amour, Comme une brise légère, un détour. Nos doigts se frôlent, nos regards s'envolent, Dans ce doux élan, nos vies se dévoilent. ## Couplet 2 Sous la lune argentée qui nous éclaire, Nos rêves se tissent, nos secrets se libèrent. Ton souffle chaud contre ma peau, L'amour danse, insaisissable flambeau. ## Refrain C'est le toucher de l'amour, Comme une brise légère, un détour. Nos doigts se frôlent, nos regards s'envolent, Dans ce doux élan, nos vies se dévoilent. ## Pont Et si le monde s'effondre, Nos étreintes resteront profondes. Le toucher de l'amour, éternel et pur, Dans nos cœurs, il demeure, sûr. ## Refrain C'est le toucher de l'amour, Comme une brise légère, un détour. Nos doigts se frôlent, nos regards s'envolent, Dans ce doux élan, nos vies se dévoilent. ## Outro Le toucher de l'amour, une mélodie, Qui résonne en nous, infinie. Dans chaque geste, chaque frisson, C'est là que commence notre chanson. FWIW here's a song I did in French. I think the lyrics are a lot better, if I do say so myself... the English translation is in the notes below the video. 1 Quote Craig Anderton Educational site: http://www.craiganderton.org Music: http://www.youtube.com/thecraiganderton Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/craig_anderton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RABid Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 Was riding with my sister Sunday night and she had a gospel radio station on. A song came on that I did not recognize and a minute later my subconscious brane was was telling me "this may be the worst song you have ever heard." After wondering why I was having such a bad reaction to the song I started listening closer. It was a string of catch phrases. Every cliche you can imagine loosely woven together with no real direction. No anchor at all. After reading the above lyrics I wonder if the song I heard on the radio was written by an AI. Quote This post edited for speling. My Sweetwater Gear Exchange Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anderton Posted April 23 Author Share Posted April 23 2 hours ago, RABid said: After reading the above lyrics I wonder if the song I heard on the radio was written by an AI. I asked ChatGPT if it could comment on what you said. Here's what it said: Certainly! Music is a fascinating realm where our brains respond to patterns, emotions, and creativity. Let’s delve into the points raised in the passage: Catchphrases and Clichés: Many songs, especially in popular genres, rely on familiar phrases, hooks, and clichés. These elements create comfort and recognition for listeners. However, overused or unoriginal phrases can become repetitive and lose impact. Songwriting and Creativity: Songwriting is an art form that involves storytelling, emotional expression, and creativity. Talented songwriters carefully craft lyrics, melodies, and structures to evoke specific feelings and connect with listeners. A well-written song often has a clear theme, relatable emotions, and a memorable melody. AI and Songwriting: Artificial intelligence (AI) has been used to generate lyrics and music. AI models analyze existing songs, learn patterns, and create new content based on those patterns. However, AI-generated songs may lack the depth, emotional nuance, and originality that human songwriters bring. The Radio Song: While it’s unlikely that the specific song you heard was entirely AI-written, it might have followed predictable patterns. Some radio songs prioritize catchiness and familiarity over lyrical depth. If a song lacks a clear anchor or direction, it can feel disjointed or lacking substance. Human vs. AI Songwriting: Human songwriters draw from personal experiences, emotions, and cultural context. AI generates content based on statistical patterns without true understanding. The best songs often blend creativity, authenticity, and craftsmanship. In summary, our reactions to music are subjective, whether it’s composed by a human or an AI. Even the catchiest tunes evoke different responses in each listener. Quote Craig Anderton Educational site: http://www.craiganderton.org Music: http://www.youtube.com/thecraiganderton Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/craig_anderton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Emm Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 All of this reminds me of old science-fiction movies, where the robot fritzes out and repeatedly runs into a wall. It also brings to mind birds feeding their babies chewed-up worm pate... sort of like feeding toddlers at Taco Bueno. 🤨 Too bad this will catch on. As Voltaire allegedly once said, "Anything too stupid to be spoken out loud is sung." 1 Quote An evangelist came to town who was so good, even Huck Finn was saved until Tuesday. ~ "Tom Sawyer" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProfD Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 58 minutes ago, Anderton said: Talented songwriters carefully craft lyrics, melodies, and structures to evoke specific feelings and connect with listeners. However, AI-generated songs may lack the depth, emotional nuance, and originality that human songwriters bring. Human songwriters draw from personal experiences, emotions, and cultural context. AI generates content based on statistical patterns without true understanding. The best songs often blend creativity, authenticity, and craftsmanship. Of course, humans have written songs devoid of emotion and craftsmanship too. 🤣 IMO, as long as AI cannot draw on that which makes us human, AI-composed songs will reflect that lack of depth in one way or another. 😎 Quote PD "The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return."--E. Ahbez "Nature Boy" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thethirdapple Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 Interesting that the two version differ in the first couplet/verse rhyming scheme… French lyrics are: A B A B English lyrics are : A A B B The conjugation of certain words is so off that the rhyming breaks down. As in the second couplet/verse. Why is the word “secret” being replaced with “fear”? This completely changes the feeling from intimacy to interrogation! And in general yeah, the grammatical structure of the french lyrics is off putting. Not poetic or soft nor romantic intonations… ASININE, indeed! PEACE _ _ _ Quote When musical machines communicate, we had better listen… http://youtube.com/@ecoutezpourentendre Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenElevenShadows Posted Monday at 03:00 AM Share Posted Monday at 03:00 AM I used Gemini to generate song lyrics in English, based on "The Touch of Love". This is attempt #1. Touch of Love (Verse 1) I wandered through the world alone, a stranger in the crowd A hollow melody in my heart, a whisper never loud Then one day, your eyes met mine, a spark ignited there A warmth bloomed in my lonely soul, a love beyond compare (Chorus) The touch of love, a whispered sigh, a feeling sent from above A brush of hands, a glance that lingers, a symphony of two It chases away the winter's chill, a fire that burns so true The touch of love, forever bound, me and you (Verse 2) Your laughter's like a summer breeze, it dances in the air Your presence fills the emptiness, a solace beyond compare In tangled fingers, promises, a future we create A world where worries fade away, a love that won't abate (Chorus) The touch of love, a whispered sigh, a feeling sent from above A brush of hands, a glance that lingers, a symphony of two It chases away the winter's chill, a fire that burns so true The touch of love, forever bound, me and you (Bridge) Through storms and sunshine, hand in hand, our journey will unfold With every touch, a silent vow, a love story to be told (Chorus) The touch of love, a whispered sigh, a feeling sent from above A brush of hands, a glance that lingers, a symphony of two It chases away the winter's chill, a fire that burns so true The touch of love, forever bound, me and you (Outro) Forever bound, forever true, the touch of love, it sees us through Quote Ken Lee Photography - photos and books Eleven Shadows ambient music The Mercury Seven-cool spacey music Linktree to various sites Instagram Nightaxians Video Podcast Eleven Shadows website Ken Lee Photography Pinterest Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anderton Posted Monday at 04:46 AM Author Share Posted Monday at 04:46 AM Again, no story. Just a word salad of cliches. Oh well. Well, thanks for trying... Quote Craig Anderton Educational site: http://www.craiganderton.org Music: http://www.youtube.com/thecraiganderton Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/craig_anderton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenElevenShadows Posted Monday at 05:27 AM Share Posted Monday at 05:27 AM 1 hour ago, Anderton said: Again, no story. Just a word salad of cliches. Oh well. Well, thanks for trying... Thanks. I've got more attempts. Attempt #2. See what you think. I'll tell more about this and subsequent attempts later. _____ Touch of Love (Verse 1) Caught a Greyhound outta Memphis, seventeen and full of doubt Hitchhiked west on dusty highways, nothin' much to figure out Just a guitar slung across my shoulder, singin' for my supper crowd Every town a blurry memory, heart a-rollin' like a cloud (Chorus) But then one night in Oklahoma, under a neon diner sign A waitress with eyes like twilight poured my coffee, sweet and fine Something shifted in that moment, a warmth I couldn't place The touch of love, a gentle whisper, leavin' its mark upon my face (Verse 2) We talked for hours 'til the sunrise, about dreams and dusty roads Shared a pack of smokes out back, stories whispered in the code Of hearts that wandered, searching, never findin' what they sought 'Til a chance encounter, a connection, a bond that couldn't be bought (Chorus) And then one night in Oklahoma, under a neon diner sign A waitress with eyes like twilight poured my coffee, sweet and fine Something shifted in that moment, a warmth I couldn't place The touch of love, a gentle whisper, leavin' its mark upon my face (Bridge) The road kept callin', that's the life I knew But her smile, a beacon in the darkness, pulled me back to somethin' new We married 'neath a borrowed willow, vows whispered in the breeze Oklahoma sky, a canvas painted, with love and promises (Chorus) 'Cause that one night in Oklahoma, under a neon diner sign A waitress with eyes like twilight poured my coffee, sweet and fine Something shifted in that moment, a warmth I couldn't place The touch of love, a gentle whisper, leavin' its mark upon my face (Outro) Years gone by, the diner's faded, but the memory remains The touch of love, a constant echo, singin' through my weary veins Quote Ken Lee Photography - photos and books Eleven Shadows ambient music The Mercury Seven-cool spacey music Linktree to various sites Instagram Nightaxians Video Podcast Eleven Shadows website Ken Lee Photography Pinterest Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenElevenShadows Posted Monday at 05:30 AM Share Posted Monday at 05:30 AM Attempt #3. And yes, all of these are still with Gemini. _____ Touch of Love (Verse 1) Steel town nights, ten bucks a shift, grease under my fingernails Lonely diner coffee, dreams on a smoky drift Same faces, same stories, same neon glow on my face Never thought this life could change, never thought I'd find my place (Chorus) Then you walked in, a wild rose in denim and boots Eyes like a summer storm, a smile that could melt the loot A jukebox hero's song started playing on repeat Suddenly this rundown joint felt like a million-dollar suite The touch of love, yeah, it hit me like a runaway train Broke through the bars I built around my heart, washed away the rain (Verse 2) We talked 'til the sunrise, about nothin' and everything Turns out your dreams were wilder than the engine I used to sing Leavin' this town on a freight train, chasing the open road Never thought I'd have the guts, but with you by my side, the fear explodes (Chorus) The touch of love, yeah, it set my soul on fire Burned away the doubt, ignited a burning desire We hit the highway with nothin' but hope and a prayer Just two hearts beatin' as one, breathin' the open air The touch of love, yeah, it showed me a brand new game Riskin' it all for a chance, ain't nothin' gonna be the same (Bridge) There'll be detours and storms, nights colder than steel But with your hand in mine, baby, every battle's surreal We'll face 'em all together, shoulder to shoulder and strong 'Cause the touch of love, it keeps us goin' when the road gets long (Chorus) The touch of love, yeah, it's the only thing that's true The compass that guides us, the forever me and you Through dusty plains and city lights, across mountains high and low The touch of love, yeah, it's all we need, wherever we go (Outro) Yeah, wherever we go, the touch of love, it's all we know Quote Ken Lee Photography - photos and books Eleven Shadows ambient music The Mercury Seven-cool spacey music Linktree to various sites Instagram Nightaxians Video Podcast Eleven Shadows website Ken Lee Photography Pinterest Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenElevenShadows Posted Monday at 05:33 AM Share Posted Monday at 05:33 AM Here's Attempt #4. Touch of Love (Verse 1) Steel town twilight, shadows crawlin' long Down Main Street, where the neon hollers its song Just another Friday, another restless night Same faces, same stories, under the pale gaslight (Chorus) But then I saw you, standin' by the diner door Red dress smolderin', like a flame on the factory floor A single teardrop, traced a path down your cheek And suddenly this dead-end town, didn't feel so bleak (Verse 2) Slipped in a booth, two coffees, black as night You told me 'bout dreams that vanished in the fight A one-way ticket, clutched in your tremblin' hand A chance to escape, to a faraway land (Chorus) But then you reached out, took a touch of my arm A spark ignited, kept me safe from the storm Just the ghost of a smile, playin' on your lips And suddenly the future, didn't look like a ship (Bridge) We talked for hours, about nothin' and everything Forgotten the clatter, the steel mill's constant ring Just two lost souls, findin' solace in the sound Of each other's heartbeat, poundin' on solid ground (Chorus) And when it came time, to close down the diner door The city lights twinkled, not so menacing anymore Your touch lingered still, a fire in my soul Maybe this town ain't so bad, if I ain't here alone (Outro) Walked you to your bus, with the promise in the air A love born in twilight, a chance we both would dare The touch of love, on a steel town night Showed me a future, bathed in golden light Quote Ken Lee Photography - photos and books Eleven Shadows ambient music The Mercury Seven-cool spacey music Linktree to various sites Instagram Nightaxians Video Podcast Eleven Shadows website Ken Lee Photography Pinterest Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenElevenShadows Posted Monday at 05:43 AM Share Posted Monday at 05:43 AM This is Attempt #5, and will be the final one. I'll be interested to hear any opinions about any of them. I'll share more about these later. _____ Touch of Love (Verse 1) I was a tumbleweed, a lonesome soul, blowin' 'cross the plains A dusty heart, a tattered coat, weathered by the rains Seen the sun scorch the cracked-earth ground, felt the winter's icy sting Wandered miles with nary a sound, a lonely, mournful thing (Chorus) Then one day, beneath a cotton sky, a vision filled my sight A calico dress, a tear in her eye, bathed in golden light Her touch, a whisper on the breeze, sent shivers down my spine The touch of love, settin' my knees weak, a melody divine (Verse 2) She was a wild rose, bloomin' strong, in the shadow of a shack Lost her man to a miner's song, never looked back Her eyes, like pools of twilight blue, held a sorrow deep and wide But when she smiled, the whole world knew, love wouldn't be denied (Chorus) And there beneath that cotton sky, our destinies entwined Her touch, a whisper on a sigh, a solace I could find A warmth that chased the desert chill, a promise whispered low The touch of love, my spirit filled, with a place where I could go (Bridge) We built a life with weathered hands, in that shack beneath the sun Planted seeds in parched-out lands, 'til a garden had begun Fought the dust and wind and rain, with hearts forever strong The touch of love, eased all the pain, where we both belonged (Chorus) Years went by, the cotton turned to gray, her hair a silver thread But the fire in her eyes still stayed, the love we always said And as we sat on that porch swing low, watchin' the sunset glow The touch of love, a warmth would flow, a feeling I still know (Outro) Now she's gone, a whisper on the breeze, but her memory remains The touch of love, settin' my soul at ease, through sunshine and the rains For even tumbleweeds can find a place, to weather every storm With the echo of a loving embrace, keepin' my heart warm Quote Ken Lee Photography - photos and books Eleven Shadows ambient music The Mercury Seven-cool spacey music Linktree to various sites Instagram Nightaxians Video Podcast Eleven Shadows website Ken Lee Photography Pinterest Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenElevenShadows Posted Monday at 05:46 AM Share Posted Monday at 05:46 AM There's all sorts of ways you can go from here. You can: 1.) Create a collection of songs with AI-generated lyrics using "Touch of Love" as the song title. 2.) Go all in and have some AI-generated music to go along with the AI-generated lyrics, then use some AI mastering and AI-generated artwork for the album. Quote Ken Lee Photography - photos and books Eleven Shadows ambient music The Mercury Seven-cool spacey music Linktree to various sites Instagram Nightaxians Video Podcast Eleven Shadows website Ken Lee Photography Pinterest Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobshaw78 Posted Thursday at 03:13 PM Share Posted Thursday at 03:13 PM Randomly a few weeks back I asked ChatGPT to write a Liasm Gallagher song...... it's possibly his finest work since quiting the band! (Verse 1) Walking down the street with my hands in my pockets, Got a cigarette burning, feeling like a rocket. People passing by, they don't know my name, But I'm feeling alright, yeah, I'm playing the game. (Pre-Chorus) In this crazy world, I'm just trying to find my way, But when the music starts, all my troubles fade away. (Chorus) Sing it loud, sing it proud, let your voice be heard, In this crazy world, let's spread the word. We'll sing together, through the highs and lows, In every heartache, in every echo. (Verse 2) Lost in the moment, with the rhythm in my soul, Got my eyes on the prize, I won't let it go. Through the stormy weather, and the pouring rain, I'll keep singing my song, never feeling the strain. (Pre-Chorus) In this crazy world, I'm just trying to find my way, But when the music starts, all my troubles fade away. (Chorus) Sing it loud, sing it proud, let your voice be heard, In this crazy world, let's spread the word. We'll sing together, through the highs and lows, In every heartache, in every echo. (Bridge) So raise your hands up high, and let your spirit soar, We'll keep singing our song, forevermore. With every beat of the drum, and every strum of the guitar, We'll light up the sky, like a shining star. (Chorus) Sing it loud, sing it proud, let your voice be heard, In this crazy world, let's spread the word. We'll sing together, through the highs and lows, In every heartache, in every echo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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