Just listened to an iTunes preview of "Invitation" (I don't know the song)... "Out of the blue, suddenly YOU.." That's it.
Seriously, you don't need to rerecord anything, that was great. Really reminds me of a scene from West Side Story or something along that line..
LB, funny story.. downloaded your first tune, hit play, and for some reason it triggered SK's "Not another who can I turn to" at the same time. I didn't clue in right away and let me tell you, what a vibe! Complex and mysterious. I was quite blown away. (I like your solo work too. )