You guys are a kind of impatient or what?
When I posted my stuff here I waited for a couple of weeks until the first feedback came...
Well, anyway, Fonki... This is a fun piece but... It is like... without soul, you know what I mean? It's assembled and I'm afraid it sounds like that, nothing more, really. Leave that stuff for kids. Play some soul into your creation, don't play "LEGO", you are a musician after all.
You can call me a bastard now, I think I deserve that.