hariseldon Posted December 21, 2004 Share Posted December 21, 2004 I'm writing a song and I came up with this phrase: "giving what's to come the eye". What I mean to say is something like trying to seduce the future, looking bravely tothe future, that kind of thing. It goes great with the rythm. Is this english/understood? Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tedster Posted December 21, 2004 Share Posted December 21, 2004 Works for me. And, the beauty of lyrics is that you can do that, and if people understand, great, and if they don't, it's their problem... "Cisco Kid, was a friend of mine" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strangerbytheminute Posted December 22, 2004 Share Posted December 22, 2004 Works for me too. I tend to enjoy lryics that are a little unusual without slaughtering the language. It's also nice that you're putting thought into what you're writing about too. So much of what I hear today is the first thing that comes into people's heads........ www.strangerbytheminute.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hariseldon Posted December 22, 2004 Author Share Posted December 22, 2004 Thanks for the replies! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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