mach1mike Posted February 17, 2004 Share Posted February 17, 2004 I wrote this to my wife, what do ya think. Honey I swear I meant those vows when we wed You wont find me in someone elses bed I know I told you that was the last part I needed And after that the car would be completed But Truth is it aint the car that needs it Its an addiction and I just cant beat it I Got an addiction, Gotta get some Make a fast run, Itll be fun In a straight line, Make the best time For a moment the moments all mine And baby You wont find me down at the bar Just step outside Im probably under the car theres no girly mags on my side of the bed Just the latest hot rods that Ive already read Yes I hear you yellin out the back door What you tearin that motor apart again for The car ran fine, it was pullin a decent time Now its spread all over the garage floor I Got an addiction, Gotta get some Make a fast run, Itll be fun In a straight line, Make the best time For a moment the moments all mine I swear youre the only one that lights up my nights But without my hot rod things just wouldnt be right I Got an addiction, Gotta get some Make a fast run, Itll be fun In a straight line, Make the best time For a moment the moments all mine Broke my back, that didnt stop me God Favors no Group, Only Religions Do That Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hip Posted February 19, 2004 Share Posted February 19, 2004 The song wouldn't happen to be straightforward hard rock, would it? If not, then it sure would be more interesting. Lyrics were fine. A bit off-topic: could someone suggest me a forum where it's possible to get decent feedback of original lyrics and that wouldn't mess around with my copyright ownership? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mach1mike Posted February 20, 2004 Author Share Posted February 20, 2004 i had in mind maybe a country rock beat. God Favors no Group, Only Religions Do That Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rockinredneck69 Posted February 20, 2004 Share Posted February 20, 2004 hey Mike, you have some incredible lyrics going! I've read through your previous post and get the impression you listen to a variety of differant styles of music. Do yourself a favor and get into playing an insturment no matter what it is. Get some music theory into your head so you can get an idea of what makes the melody work. I'm a newbie to the bass, its been an eye-opener for me as I used to get stuff like you are writing from time ta time and now that I'm getting the basics of theory down, a whole new world as opened up to me. Just some advice...keep it working bubba! Donnie Peterson Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mach1mike Posted February 20, 2004 Author Share Posted February 20, 2004 I resently bought a guitar and soon I will be jamin. God Favors no Group, Only Religions Do That Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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