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Hey Ric! Thanks for the welcome!

 

Hugo: Thanks for the listen and the like; I appreciate it. I can see that Idol-Lennon thing (the style of course!) I get a lot of "sounds like Beatles" comments, (can't escape your influences I guess) and I take it as a compliment. Certainly something to strive for; I'll work on your suggestion and Thanks again!

[Critic's corner - post your finished compositions here]

Hey nice to be here! I'm a songwriter not a pro player or producer and DEFINITELY not a singer, (LOL)-but I CAN write! I recently posted a song, (Daddy-o) taken from a 1 track tape rec. (don't ask) It's a workfile. If you get a chance I'd appreciate a listen.

 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=170948

 

In the meantime this is the first song I saw here:

Learmont:

To me a lot of synthesizer material works because the actual sounds used are intriguing to the ear; and the sound, (and note) choices in Learmont work very well. I liked this; it reminds me of background music in a movie. (that's a good thing)

I didn't care for the intro-it sounded like a slowed down recording and didn't add anything to the tune. One other thing that bothered me was the repetitive keyboard figure; (Rhodes sounding?) not the E-F notes but the sound used. I wanted to hear those notes slid up to and then slid down as a bass player would play it. Well played and well done David!

 

Anyone else wants a critique, let me know!