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#942638 - 01/14/05 01:20 AM Offered for your scrutiny & contribution: Song?
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I just happened upon this thought last night and put together what I figured somebody could run with.

Listen through it once or twice and then follow the words it will nest better after that.

I apologize if I seem to be tossing out ideas and then doing little with them but I really have no way yet to put anything down. This is a bastardization track to simply get across an idea. I got a good feel for this and words just fell about the place.
(well.. my words anyway)

There's a EZBus on the way to me now so hopefully I can be of more use in the future


Song4 noise

As Follows:

Let this be the words of the new book
We write together
Side by side
Our hearts beating as one

As we turn the page towards a new day
As equals we share
All the world
Tomorrow surely will bring

Your hand in my hand
Each woman child and man
Will feel warmth and love
Of our unity

When we come together and see

--- this is lead space ---

Mark the line right here in the sand
We'll make a promise
To not step back
From where we've just come

Each step that we take into the future
New bonds that hold us
Breath life into
A thread of common humanity

Your hand in my hand
Each woman, child and man
Will feel the warmth and love
Of our unity

When we come together and see

--- this is more work out space ---

Repeat the last section or part thereof and trail away into the sunset.

Title: Come Together or simply Together

Let me know when I start to sound too much like myself and then I'll start to change direction.
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#942639 - 01/14/05 02:57 AM Re: Offered for your scrutiny & contribution: Song?
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Needs a click. Can't find "1" to save my life.
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#942640 - 01/14/05 05:07 AM Re: Offered for your scrutiny & contribution: Song?
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I like it...I like the country-esque chords. I'd lose the flanger and the delay for a bit. I could hear something powerful come out of that.
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#942641 - 01/14/05 09:22 AM Re: Offered for your scrutiny & contribution: Song?
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Originally posted by offramp:
Needs a click. Can't find "1" to save my life.
You'd better learn to swim, as mentioned, I don't have the technology to generate one. My foot was working at roughly 60hz if that any use to you
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Tedster.... that was one of those "step on everything and go" sessions where I turn on a little digital recorder and fool about. That was the only chunk of it that made it into the computer so I ran with it.

Be sure to replace ALL OF IT!!!! I only included it with the lyrical suggestion because I felt it required the sound that caused it to come out.

As always.... ignore where necessary.
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#942642 - 01/15/05 07:52 PM Re: Offered for your scrutiny & contribution: Song?
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Hiya shoes,

I think this song has potential too, FWIW. Is there anyway you could generate a chord chart, time signature etc if you can't generate a click track? Otherwise you may have problems getting people jumping on board this one ;\)

Because there's not a final demo yet for this song, will call Hooper's song number 4, and yours number 5, which keeps the order of development. Hope that doesn't sound too anal \:D
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#942643 - 01/16/05 12:38 AM Re: Offered for your scrutiny & contribution: Song?
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That's a great suggestion given I'm still waiting for the EZbus I bought to arrive. Once I get that I'll clean this up and provide something with a click, clean and perhaps useful (that would be my optimism slipping through there)

I was reluctant to post anything given there are a number of songs in the works and I'm not sure if it helps to have more than a couple up there at any given time.

Shelf this for later or perhaps way later.
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#942644 - 01/16/05 04:37 AM Re: Offered for your scrutiny & contribution: Song?
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Originally posted by Guitars are like shoes. But louder.:
That's a great suggestion given I'm still waiting for the EZbus I bought to arrive. Once I get that I'll clean this up and provide something with a click, clean and perhaps useful (that would be my optimism slipping through there)

I was reluctant to post anything given there are a number of songs in the works and I'm not sure if it helps to have more than a couple up there at any given time.

Shelf this for later or perhaps way later.
Heya,

This song has just as much potential as any other - so don't think it's shelved at all
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