#513979 - 05/05/02 09:29 PM
songs ive written.....
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jeBus!!
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hey guys this is my first post in a while....i posted these songs quite some time ago at this same website but before they had a "songwriting" forum...i personally dont think im very good at songwriting but my friends beg to differ..anyways here are a few to scare you away
ps- no official titles yet...my band is still deciding
SONG #1
dreams never ending
bombs always sending
truth always bending with your love you're never lending
i want, to see
if your love for me is real-it seems iffy
love cannot be this
from you i earn,
the wonderful feeling i always miss
dying,crying,open my eyes i feel like sighing
loving,hating,all these new feelings you're creating
for me
nightmares it's beginning
peace,love,hate, my world for u is spinning
lies, constant mending
from your hate my wounds need tending
i want, to be
truely yours, - but i think u hate me
hate cannot be this
from u i yearn
for that fimiliar feeling of bliss
living,smiling, close my eyes i feel like filing your love
loving,hating,all these new feelings you're creating for me
somewhere in a darkened hole,
there ends a perfectly ruined soul
you laugh,you hate, all these feelings you create
for me
SONG #2
hopelesness
maybe if the world wasnt a mess
I could get through this
Time
maybe if i wasnt blind,
i could walk that line
anonymous
maybe ill discover trust,
i just want it to work otu for us
if i could get it together,
i'd feel so much better
i try so hard for you,
but i hope u you'll notice soon
waste
none of this is worth your grace
jsut a dream i want to taste
conufused
my thoughts abused
i really dotn wanna lose
flowing
your beauty to me u keep showing
still my love for u is growing
sometimes im sure you like me
but as i look at the last pedal, it's kinda eerie, it says u have love for me, but i dont feel any
SONG #3 title "faceless death" is pending
in a utopia you are
watching life go by you dont seem to bother
bother to see the maimed
time goes by u start to feel left- brained
so engufled in your entertainment and bliss
that you cant even see that this
that this is the death you once left
youre just an artery pulsing through the hearts of the strife
in the bodies of the helpless life takes its toll
i know that you cant keep it away
you've lost yourself with these thoughts you've been keeping at bay
you know that its there
but its one thought that you know you cant bare
faceless u stare
you face the next to die
standing over the prey you start to realize
realize that waht you wanted to see isnt what u expected it to be
screaming out vain they ask you your name
grinning proudly, you say
"my name is legion; for we are many"
faceless you're envied
SONG #4
Lately, you dont know
How far your criticism of me can go
you cant, untie me
but for the record you just think im crazy
oblivious, to it
but these words you say to me wont sit
now you over react and hate me
now im the one
that keeps on falling from this earth
you all know how this goes
but u dont care
that this heart you've stabbed needs cured more
silence
seems to be the only solution in this world we destroy
gossip
appears to be the only reason we cant calibrate
somewhere,somewhere
you must be waiting for me all teared
I hope, for it
youre the last play u know i want blitzed
I fall, stand up
i hope you get save me from this rut
recently, you've helped
realize these chunks in life i've choked
you cant ,wrap me
cause the paper you used isnt quite fitting
dubious, to let
maybe if u listened more you could help me aid it
now u counter attack and blame me
now you're the one
who keeps me going face first
you all know, that this shows
but u cant bare
cause you once knew how it was to be there
hatred
seems to be the only correlation in this peaceless world we live in
judgement
appears justice is only served with pointless content
lets think of paradise , while we drown in our ignorant waste of sacrafice
k thats about it i havent been doign this for too long...um the quote in song #3 is acutally out of the bible although im not making any refernces to christianity..you guys should be able to figure out who faceless death is..am i the only one who can look back at their sogns a day or so later and feel so corny?
jebus
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#513980 - 05/28/02 12:48 AM
Re: songs ive written.....
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Imbecilia
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Registered: 03/12/02
Posts: 155
Loc: Wuerzburg, Franconia, GERMANY
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There ain`t no songwriters here, sorry...
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#513981 - 05/28/02 01:36 AM
Re: songs ive written.....
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Dak Lander
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Registered: 01/10/02
Posts: 7728
Loc: Temecula, LoCal, USA
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jeBus,
The stuff looks cool but where are you going with it? What we'd like is a rough tune to go with the lyrics. Doesn't have, nor do we want it, to be clean & record quality. Listen to some of the earlier posted tunes & you'll get the jist. Most of us would like to hear where you're coming from. We may also do up a melody totally different than what you've written but that's a whole other ballgame.
Keep a scribblin'...
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