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#513360 - 04/04/02 03:49 AM

please give me some feedback(critique)

chucknkd
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http://mywebpages.comcast.net/chucknkd/
i wrote songs 1-3-4-5.
let me know what you think. :p
thanks,
chucknkd

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#513361 - 04/04/02 03:53 PM

Re: please give me some feedback(critique)

garyd
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Wow! Your stuff sounds fabulous! Excellent production, great hooks, fine playing. What drum samples do you use?

I really liked "Alright" and "Makes Me High".
Have you had any success pitching the songs?

My one criticism is that I wanted to hear all the songs, not just clips.

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#513362 - 04/04/02 04:00 PM

Re: please give me some feedback(critique)

chucknkd
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gary,
thanks for the reply. as for drums, it depends on which song. theres another link on my page "quick notes" that takes you a page where i give details on the equipment used. if its one of the battery songs, i downloaded the kit off of the KVR-VST site. (do a search and it should pull up, i dont know the address). again thanks for the knid words.
chuck

ps-i put up clips because of limited webspace.

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#513363 - 04/04/02 04:04 PM

Re: please give me some feedback(critique)

garyd
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I especially liked the drums on "Little Things". What samples were those?

You have a great feel for pop production and writing! I hope you have great sucess!

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#513364 - 04/04/02 04:55 PM

Re: please give me some feedback(critique)

chucknkd
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thanks again gary. little things used BATTERY as a drum machine (VSTi in cubase) with the kit that i downloaded off of the KVR-VST site. i cant say enough good stuff about battery. life has been much better since it came along.

cheers,
chuck

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