Cool song.
I'm not sure which part of the song you're referring to.
I can say that the first minute is better than the rest and when the metal sounding guitar comes in it really doesn't seem to fit and at one point it sounds like you're playing a scale.
I would say that your are very talented in ambient sounding music where there are a lot of keyboard layers and the drums are obviously programmed. You do that very well.
When the drums take on a traditional rock beat and the guitar comes in it kind of sound amateurish.
I know that's a pretty strong criticism but if I thought the whole thing sucked I probably wouldn't have written anything but the ambient stuff is really promising.
