Song80s Posted August 29, 2019 Share Posted August 29, 2019 The Runner Hi, my original composition about a favorite activity ! 100% Kronos Hope you like Greg Quote Why fit in, when you were born to stand out ? My Soundcloud with many originals: [70's Songwriter] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bill Heins Posted September 2, 2019 Share Posted September 2, 2019 You do "feel good music", I enjoy listening to everything you post Bill Quote http://www.billheins.com/ Hail Vibrania! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Song80s Posted September 9, 2019 Author Share Posted September 9, 2019 Thank you, Bill ! I try to deliver spirit and attitude. My muse is also pushing me Quote Why fit in, when you were born to stand out ? My Soundcloud with many originals: [70's Songwriter] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benedict RM Posted March 9, 2022 Share Posted March 9, 2022 I was waiting for the raising runner to be missed by their endless sender or a Manfred Mann song at least. I jest and show my age. Far more relaxed overall. Maybe a bit too much so. Altho the backing feel rather rigid which takes from the whole I feel. I know running is mechanical and repetitive but it is also full of detail, nuance an things passing. I do wonder at the "gaps", I get no sense of what they signify - crossing the road??? You seem to have technical ability but I would like to see/hear you step outside this as a technical thing and see it as a storytelling thing and build stronger leads which can be both instrument and sound/feel, to make a grander journey with more movement and nuance.🙂 This is an article and video on that subject that I think may be relevant: Story – https://benedictroffmarsh.com/2020/03/25/story-how-do-i-find-the-stories-i-tell/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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