Just seeing if I could get some comments that would help with my songs mix and engineering.

Pirates Cove
6:33

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=498460

Kind Regards,

Andy

Link not working here. Also, critical listening is IMHO rather impossible via MP3, especially via a server access. Just too many variables to yield even tolerable audio quality.

Sounds pretty good...kinda runs on a bit after the first 1:30.
It would work better if one could see the video/film...but overall, the mix sounds good.

Without the vid, it is hard to associate the mix to its purpose. But, what I feel it lacks is any kind of .... captivation... The composition is good, don't get me wrong. But for instance, you have the drums buried quite deep, I would assume that the music is leading up to something... So maybe slowly increase the volume/intenstity to the point where you want the audience to feel the BAM. So the music carries on, and the drums slowly build intensity.. as in a crescendo.

This is an uneducated critique. Just my 2cents.