Jim
I wish there were more like your neighbor Steve. Ever listen to the radio and wonder where all the good songs went? Jim Steinman who wrote for Meat Loaf was really brilliant with the turnaround or play on words. What a story teller.
I can't stand broadcast radio for music anymore. Constantly hitting the seek button to find something new. I go to XM or mp3.
I met Ralph Murphy here on the gulf coast a few years back and in Nashville last year and he has the history and credentials to back up his hit song theories. You can read his stuff here:
Ralph Murphy Taylor Swift currently is a big exception to Ralph's Rules.
I wish Steve would have told you who in the business is looking for strong songs. We could send them a demo.
Hope to hear you someday on the radio and I promise not to hit the seek button.
Dave G