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As a keyboard player all but 4 yrs. of my life, and a songwriter since 1973, I have put down a lot of private tracks. I need to get one of the songs made into a video by professionals that can get it aired nationwide. The song is called The U.S.A. and can be heard at http://www.mp3.com/Paul_Dieter. Imagine the covered wagons and the calvery riding along side them in the old western days; afterward, scenes of people helping each other to build the America as we know it. Final scenes showing the WTC disaster and a present day crowd of thousands together singing "The United State of America. Just an idea but if it sells, the proceeds could go to help the WTC's victims' families. It is copyrighted and I am a member of ASCAP.
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I need to get one of the songs made into a video by professionals that can get it aired nationwide.

 

I have no idea how to go about doing that, Paul - sorry. If I did, I'd have probably done so for one of my own tunes long ago. :idk:

 

Best of luck with your song!

 

dB

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:keys:==> David Bryce Music • Funky Young Monks <==:rawk:

 

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David Bryce, I Need Advice

 

Wasn't that the name of an unreleased Dr. Seuss book about teen sex?

 

"Should I stick it here or there? Should I stick it anywhere?

I feel funny down below, should I just tell Suzie no?

She that says she's done it twice, David Bryce I need advice."

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Paul:

 

As you are an ASCAP member you may be able to find some help here...

 

http://www.ascap.com/collaborator/

 

Or maybe someone there could direct you in the right direction

 

PEACE!!! http://www.musicplayer.com/ubb/smile.gif

"I may be a craven little coward, but I'm a greedy craven little coward." Daffy Duck
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Originally posted by steadyb:

David Bryce, I Need Advice

 

Wasn't that the name of an unreleased Dr. Seuss book about teen sex?

 

"Should I stick it here or there? Should I stick it anywhere?

I feel funny down below, should I just tell Suzie no?

She that says she's done it twice, David Bryce I need advice."

 

Should I ask her for a date?

Should I go home and masturbate?

I'm getting up the nerve to try -

My throat is getting very dry.

Should I take her to the dance?

Should I grope her with my hands?

Should I stop looking at her chest?

I can't help it - she's the BEST!

 

Should we do it after school?

Will she think my room is cool?

Should we do it in the car?

My, what a lot of places there are!

 

Did she, did she do my friend?

Would that, would that be the end?

Yes she, yes she did my friend,

But now she wants me back again!

 

Should I buy flowers for romance?

Will chocolate get me in her pants?

Should I buy a condom true?

The one in my wallet's not too new.

Should I try to make a joke?

Should I suggest she take a toke?

Can I get her into bed

If she's not stoned out of her head?

 

Will I get to second base

Before she slaps me in the face?

Will she teach me something new

Or send me home with balls of blue?

Should I act like I'm a pro?

Fake the stuff that I don't know?

Or should I stick with pure romance

Since I just lost it in my pants?

 

This message has been edited by dansouth@yahoo.com on 10-01-2001 at 02:41 AM

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On a tissue? In a sock?

Gee I like to grab my ...

Knock first mom, don't just come in.

Is it true that it's a sin?

It may be, but I don't mind

I just hope I don't go blind.

I like to do it here or there

I like to do it everywhere

I like the Baywatch girl named Pam

And David Bryce, you is da man.

 

This message has been edited by steadyb on 10-01-2001 at 02:24 AM

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Help me, help me, Mr. Bryce!

Help me, help me get a slice!

It doesn't matter what's the price!

I'll make any sacrifice!

 

Thank you, thank you, Mr. Bryce!

Thank you for your good advice!

Getting laid is really nice!

I even got to do it twice!

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This isn't fair, I must protest,

I only want to feel her breast

I hear she truly is the best,

I must give my right arm a rest.

 

I see this madness will not cease.

At least until I get a piece.

Oh why does Suzie make me beg?

Why does she gives her ass to Gregg?

 

 

This message has been edited by steadyb on 10-01-2001 at 05:33 AM

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Originally posted by wager47:

i will check back every day

to see what Dave Bryce has to say

will he say you've crossed the line?

will he say it in a rhyme?

 

You aren't going to hear me whine

I do not think you've crossed the line

So do not check here every day

Because that's all I have to say

 

dB

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:keys:==> David Bryce Music • Funky Young Monks <==:rawk:

 

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Originally posted by wager47:

i wonder what PAULIII thinks?

 

He thinks his song is a hit and this forum is filled with sex maniacs. I, for one, am glad that he neglected to post his song on the Let's Hear It thread, because I'm rather enjoying the prurient Dr. Seuss angle. Thanks, steadyb!!!! http://www.musicplayer.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Originally posted by dansouth@yahoo.com:

He thinks his song is a hit and this forum is filled with sex maniacs. I, for one, am glad that he neglected to post his song on the Let's Hear It thread, because I'm rather enjoying the prurient Dr. Seuss angle. Thanks, steadyb!!!! http://www.musicplayer.com/ubb/smile.gif

 

Man, I didn't realize what I started!!! Actually, I laughed my ass off this morning before work after reading this flaming folder thread to be. What a great way to start the day. This should be put to music.

By the way, Dansouth, the song is posted on, I believe page 7 of the "Lets hear it" thread. The song's name is "The U.S.A." I'd like to put it to video. The setup - The old west days...conestoga wagons crossing the plains with the cavalry riding beside them...scenes throughout showing Americans helping each other to build America into what it is today...Final scenes--The WTC disaster and thousands of people singing the final chorus of The United State of America. I'd appreciate it if you would check it out give me some feed back. www.mp3.com/Paul_Dieter

 

Thanks, PAULIII

 

 

 

 

This message has been edited by PAULIII on 10-02-2001 at 12:20 AM

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Paul, will do! Looking forward to it. I'm sorry, I assumed that since you had a separate thread for your song that you didn't know about the Let's Hear It! thread. It happens fairly regularly.

 

I'll let you know what I think, and I won't even feel compelled to voice my opinions in silly rhymes. http://www.musicplayer.com/ubb/wink.gif

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I came here from Rabid's sig link

I wasn't sure if this thread would stink

I must confess, I really must say,

This thread has made my Boxing Day

 

Witty bitties, spread all round

Glaring sparing talk on sound

Merry Xmas all around

Bumping this thread is very profound

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